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Betsy Mikel's avatar

Such a timely post, thank you! I’m getting ready to query again in the new year and I think I’ll ease up on the personalization part this time.

Anecdotal data point: I tried to personalize as much as possible last round but one agent had no information available. I thought she might be a fit because she reps similar authors. I felt nervous querying with no personalized intro, but she requested my full.

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Glad you found it helpful, Betsy and best of luck. I think if the project appeals it doesn't matter.

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Marisa Russello's avatar

It's the time researching agents for personalization that kills me! So glad you mentioned this, first person I've heard say it's not worth it. Thank you!

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

In the past I would hyper personalize my queries but it didn’t seem to make a difference in full requests.

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Linda Woods Taylor's avatar

This go-‘round I dispensed with the “I see by your MSWL that you like xyz” business and got straight to the point. It hasn’t hurt my full requests a bit, plus allows me a few more words to describe my novel.

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Agree. I’ve tried it both ways in the past and see very little difference in full requests.

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Kera Hollow's avatar

This was really encouraging! I just started querying my newest work and so far I've gotten a flat 'not for me' and an offer to query another agent from a rejecting agent's agency. Hope is still high as of now.

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

So glad you found it encouraging. Best of luck. It’s hardest thing we do as writers.

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Suzanne Boggs Feinstein's avatar

I loved this part: “You are so convinced of that inevitability that it already feels real to you. Inside of you burns the energy of your potential, and it isn’t needy, constantly looking outside of itself for validation.” Yesterday, I found myself obsessively checking for responses and it was so distressing. Reading this today has shifted my mindset. Thank you! 🙏

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Suzanne, I'm so glad it helped. Querying is one of the hardest tasks for writers.

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Brianna Heath's avatar

This is the most down to earth, realistic post about querying I've seen in a while! 💙

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Thank you, Brianna.

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Angelique Fawns's avatar

I’m Querying right now! So… here’s my question- there seem to be hundreds of agents out there and very few places to sell books (really - only 5 big ones) How does that even work?

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Each publishing company has a bunch of imprints, and agents can submit to more than one imprint to a publisher. It depends on the genre but for most books there ar about 25 to 30 places to submit and agents usually include a few mid-level publishers like Source, Entangled or Alcove. That said, there are less editors than just after the pandemic when many left their jobs. Sometimes it takes months to hear back and sometimes editors ghost agents, a practice that used to be unheard of.

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Angelique Fawns's avatar

Thank you! It seems a tough game no matter what tier you are operating on.

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Paige Geiger's avatar

This is such great advice! I hear so much about the personalization piece, but it isn’t going to make or break a query. I’m only at 11 queries so I’ve a long way to go! Thanks for the inspiration.

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

And it’s so much work!

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Carley Moore's avatar

This was a great one! Thank you!

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Thank you!

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FranB's avatar

Heading back into the querying trenches next year after losing an agent, so this is very timely. The advice to query so many agents is interesting. With my last book, I stopped after thirty on the assumption I was wasting my time.

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Sorry about losing the agent! That's not fun. Good luck with the querying! I would definitely go beyond 30.

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Chandi Wyant's avatar

I love the reminder about our mindset. Decide that we are “already there"! 🙌🏽

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J Packer Samms • Cats's avatar

The hardest part about querying for me is how lonely it is. You're constantly putting yourself out there only to get form responses, or no responses at all. It's easy to let that get to you. This is all good advice, especially the part about mindset and knowing you deserve a seat at the table. Thank you!

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Melissa Amateis's avatar

Really, really needed to read this! I'm in the query trenches AGAIN (parted ways with my agent a few years ago) and I'm just so disillusioned over the entire process. I think I have a kickass story, but when I don't get any requests, it just deflates me. Sigh.

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

It truly is tough, but I wish you the best of luck. Chances increase when you've already had an agent for sure!

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Richard Donnelly's avatar

Agents got it rough. In what other industry are pros expected to engage with amateurs? Something's amiss

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Judy Taylor's avatar

Refreshing advice!

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Thank you, Judy!

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Tracey Buchanan's avatar

Terrific post, Karin! You always offer realistic encouragement and motivation to keep working. Thanks!

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Karin Gillespie's avatar

Thanks so much, Tracey.

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